All the following sentences are problematic in different ways. Some of them may be very obscure (or strange) in their meaning, while others may be excessively wordy. Rewrite each of them carefully before clicking the answers. Enjoy!
1. Steven is used to drinking a hot glass of chocolate every morning.
Steven is used to drinking a glass of hot chocolate every morning.
2. I noticed that a pair of ripped pilot’s trousers was placed on a sofa.
I noticed that a pair of pilot’s ripped trousers was placed on a sofa.
3. A gang of mobsters awaited its next victim prowling in a dark alley.
A gang of mobsters prowling in a dark alley awaited its next victim.
4. The police officer said on Friday he would release all detainees.
1. The police officer said that he would release all detainees on Friday. Or
On Friday the police officer said that he would release all detainees.
5. In a situation in which a hotel is overbooked, you may lodge your complaint to Consumer Council.
When a hotel is overbooked, you may lodge your complaint to Consumer Council.
6. All senior government officers will have an urgent meeting concerning the matter of the deteriorating air pollution in Hong Kong.
All senior government officers will have an urgent meeting about the deteriorating air pollution in Hong Kong.
7. At this point in time no one can ascertain the reason as to how the murderers could escape from the prison.
No one knows how the murderers could escape from the prison.
8. Troubled by prolonged gastroenteritis, a condition which causes diarrhoea and vomiting, some of the preschool children were suffering from stomach pain and nausea that caused them to miss a few days in nursery school this summer.
Troubled by prolonged gastroenteritis, some children missed a few days in nursery school this summer.
9. Lying under the tree and enjoying the sunshine for the whole day, all problems seem to have gone.
Lying under the tree and enjoying the sunshine for the whole day, I had a better thought of the problems in the end.
10. Piled up next to the bookshelf, I picked a detective novel at last.
Piled up next to the bookshelf, detective novels are always what I picked at last.