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Dear Eric,
Just a gentle reminder here about the demo of audiorecording on Aug 11. Could you switch on the computers before the demo? A videocamera should be set up too to record the session. Also, it would be great if you could arrange the seats into groups of four.
I’ll talk to you in person about the details soon.
Many thanks, Laura
Dear Eric,
Just a gentle reminder here about the audiorecording demo on Aug 11.
Could you
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To qualify for the position, applicants need to have an IELTS score of 6 or above, possessing a degree in graphic design. Hands-on experience in using Dreamweaver is preferable.
To qualify for the position, applicants should have an IELTS score of 6 or above, a degree in graphic design, and preferably hands-on experience in using Dreamweaver.